Typical First Drafts - Some Problems:

 

- MY COMMENTS ARE IN CAPS IN THE FOLLOWING PAPERS:

- Paper #1

- This paper probably scores about a 4/10 (1 pt for reference, 1 pt for article attached, 1 pt for 1st paragraph, 1 pt for second)
 

- Paper #2


- This paper probably scores about a 5/10 (1 pt for reference, 1 pt for article attached, 1 pt for 1st paragraph, 2 pts for second)